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A Second Opinion

 

I told you what was in my heart.
You asked me to prove it, so

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the next day,
I brought round the x-ray.

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This here, I said, tapping the acetate,
is the shadow cast by a sleepless dervish.

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And these black spots across my left ventricle
are starlings above a collapsing pier.

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This mass here
is a hospital lost in a power cut.

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And this rather dark abrasion
is a dead fox overlapping an empty wardrobe.

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Naturally, you were sceptical,
turning the sheet over and over,
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holding it up to different lights,
calling in the neighbours for a second opinion.

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My monochrome torso went up in the window
and we all stared at it from across the room,

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as if looking at my very own exhumed grave—
a skeleton jammed in a chimney flume.

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And I knew that to the untrained eye,
the September evening in my chest looked mild.

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But I trusted you, implicitly,
to take your coat with you

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on the way out.

 

by Lena

 

Refers to Ross Sutherland’s “A Second Opinion”

http://comment.lettretage.de/ross-sutherland-a-second-opinion/

 

1 Kommentar

  • Ross Sutherland

    Lena, thank you so much for this. I enjoyed this version a lot.
    I’m a huge fan of Video Poems / Poem Art. It’s a great way to add an extra metaphorical layer of interpretation to the poem. It’s a really powerful tool and it can be used in ways that subvert/ enhance / re-direct the original text. Thank you! – Ross Sutherland

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