This is my addition to the poem  http://comment.lettretage.de/ross-sutherland-a-second-opinion/.

I like this poem because its an unconventional love poem, but even though its seems to be very pessimistic regarding to the normal version of love poems, I am sure that there is a possibillity for a realistic and not to romantic version of a happy end!

 

But you walked in

and through the light of the

september evening

the skeleton in the chimney waved at you

and together we moved

into the house

right next to the hospital

in which a beautiful fox fur

warms the backrest

of the old armchair

and the derwish

jumps around

in the fireplace

 

 

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